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ESSAY TITLE : Ä£±¸Áý¿¡¼­ ³î±â(sleepover)


Student's Writing
I'll sleep and play in my friend's house tomorrow.
I'm so happy!
We'll eat omelet for dinner.
We'll watch movie after dinner.
We'll play computer games the next day.
Did you play and sleep in friend's house?
What did you do?


Teacher's Comment

I'll sleep and play in my friend's house tomorrow.

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Tomorrow I will go to my friend's house for a sleepover. ÀÌ·¸°Ôµµ Ç¥ÇöÇÒ ¼ö Àֳ׿ä.^^

I'm so happy!

We'll eat an / some / a lot of omelet for dinner.

We'll watch a movie / movies after dinner.

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We'll play computer games the next day.

Did you play and sleep in your friend's house?

-> Have you ever been to a sleepover?

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I have been to a sleepover. ÀÌ ¹®ÀåÀ» Áú¹®À¸·Î ¹Ù²Û°Çµ¥ have+pp¿¡ ´ëÇÑ ÀÌÇØ°¡ ÇÊ¿äÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

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