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Student's Writing
How was your vacation?
I had a wonderful vacation.
I went many places with my mom and dad.
The best place The favorite one​ I think is was the stadium.
Many baseball players were training when I got get there.
I take took many pictures with them.
I want to go there next vacation.


Teacher's Comment

I had a wonderful vacation.

I went many places with my mom and dad.

The best place The favorite one I think is was the stadium.

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Many baseball players were training when I got get there.

I take took many pictures with them.

I want to go there next vacation.

Where did you go?

Can you tell me?

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