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ESSAY TITLE : Çٽɳ»¿ë ¿ä¾àÇϱâ [3]


Student's Writing
Emily showed her picture to her teacher.
The dog ran over badly in the house.
Anna worked hard English.
The boy hurt when he runs.
Mr. kim went to shopping.


Teacher's Comment
1.  Emily showed her picture to her teacher.  
  - Good! Àß ½è¾î¿ä~


 2.  The dog ran over badly in the house.  
  The dog ran around the house wildly. (¶Ç´Â) The dog ran wildly around the house.  
  - ran over´Â ¡°(Â÷°¡ »ç¶÷À̳ª ¹°°ÇÀ») Ä¡´Ù¡±¶ó´Â ¶æÀÔ´Ï´Ù. 
  - ¿©±â¼­´Â °³°¡ Áý ¾ÈÀ» À̸®Àú¸® ¶Ù¾î´Ù³æ´Ù´Â Àǹ̴ϱî, ran around ¶Ç´Â ran wildly¸¦ ½á¾ß ÇØ¿ä.  
  - badly´Â ¾î»öÇϸç, ´ë½Å wildly (°ÅÄ¥°Ô, Á¤½Å¾øÀÌ)°¡ ÀÚ¿¬½º·´½À´Ï´Ù.

 3. Anna worked hard English.  ->  Anna studied English hard.  

  - work hard´Â ¡°¿­½ÉÈ÷ ÀÏÇÏ´Ù¡±¶ó´Â Ç¥ÇöÀÌÁö¸¸, °øºÎ¿¡´Â study¸¦ »ç¿ëÇØ¾ß ÇØ¿ä.  
  - ¡°¿­½ÉÈ÷ °øºÎÇß´Ù¡±´Â ¿µ¾î·Î studied hard ¶Ç´Â studied English hard°¡ Á¤È®ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.


 4.  The boy hurt when he runs.  -> The boy got hurt while running.  

  - ½ÃÁ¦°¡ ÀÏÄ¡ÇÏÁö ¾ÊÀ½: hurt´Â °ú°Å »ç°ÇÀÌ´Ï runs ¡æ was running ¶Ç´Â while runningÀ¸·Î °íÃÄ¾ß ÇØ¿ä.  
  - ¶ÇÇÑ hurt´Â º¸Åë get hurt (´ÙÄ¡´Ù) ÇüÅ·ΠÀÚÁÖ »ç¿ëµË´Ï´Ù.

 5.  Mr. kim went to shopping.  -> Mr. Kim went shopping.  

  - go to shoppingÀº Ʋ¸° Ç¥ÇöÀÔ´Ï´Ù.  
  - go shoppingÀÌ ¸Â´Â Ç¥ÇöÀ̸ç, ¡®to¡¯¸¦ ¾²Áö ¾Ê½À´Ï´Ù.  
  - KimÀº °íÀ¯¸í»ç´Ï±î Ç×»ó K¸¦ ´ë¹®ÀÚ·Î ½á¾ß ÇØ¿ä ¡æ Mr. Kim