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ESSAY TITLE : ´ëÈ­ ¿Ï¼ºÇϱâ [2]


Student's Writing
Yes, I do soccer.
I like pizza.
Yes, I can help you not.
I do homework now.
No, I don¡¯t let¡¯s.


Teacher's Comment
 1.  Yes, I like soccer.

- "Do you like ~?"´Â ÁÁ¾ÆÇϳĴ Áú¹®ÀÌ¿¡¿ä.  
- "I do soccer"´Â "³ª´Â Ã౸¸¦ ÇÑ´Ù"´Â ¶æÀε¥, ¿©±â¼­´Â ÁÁ¾ÆÇÑ´Ù´Â Àǹ̷Π"I like"¸¦ ½á¾ß ÇØ¿ä.  
👉 Do you like ¡æ I like / I don¡¯t like·Î ´ë´äÇØ¿ä!


 2. My favorite color is blue. (»öÀº ¿øÇÏ´Â °É·Î ¹Ù²ãµµ µÅ¿ä)

- Áú¹®Àº ÁÁ¾ÆÇÏ´Â »ö±òÀ» ¹¯°í ÀÖ¾î¿ä!  
- ÇÇÀÚ ÁÁ¾ÆÇÏ´Â °Ç »ö±òÀÌ ¾Æ´ÏÁÒ? 😄  
- ÀÌ·² ¶© "My favorite color is ~."·Î ¸»ÇÏ¸é µÅ¿ä!


 3.  Sorry, I can¡¯t. / Sure, I can.

- "can you~?"´Â ~ÇÒ ¼ö ÀֳĴ ¶æÀÌ¿¡¿ä.  
- °ÅÀýÇÒ ¶§´Â "help you not"ÀÌ ¾Æ´Ï¶ó "I can¡¯t"¶ó°í ÇØ¿ä.  
- Á¤ÁßÇÏ°Ô "Sorry, I can¡¯t." ¶Ç´Â "Sure, I can!" ÀÌ·¸°Ô ¸»ÇØ¿ä.


 4.  I¡¯m doing my homework.

- Áö±Ý Çϰí ÀÖ´Â ÀÏÀº ÇöÀçÁøÇàÇüÀ» ½á¾ß ÇØ¿ä!  
- I do homework´Â "³ª´Â ¼÷Á¦¸¦ ÇÑ´Ù"´Â ½À°ü °°Àº ¸»ÀÌ¿¡¿ä.  
- Áö±Ý Çϰí ÀÖ´Â °É ¸»ÇÒ ¶© "I¡¯m doing"ÀÌ ¸Â¾Æ¿ä!


 5.  Sorry, I can¡¯t. / Great! Let¡¯s go!

- "Let¡¯s ~"´Â ÇÔ²² ÇÏÀÚ´Â Á¦¾ÈÀÌ¿¡¿ä.  
- "I don¡¯t let¡¯s"´Â ¹®¹ý¿¡µµ ¾È ¸Â°í ¾î»öÇØ¿ä.